Welcome! I’m sharing six from Olivia’s wip Which is mostly done, titled FLIPPED. A story about two friends who are flipping a house together, and end up flipping for each other.
By the time they reached Mario’s car, Carter had talked himself out of whatever crazy place he’d been visiting. “I guess we are a couple of old guys. It’s barely eleven and we’re going home alone.” At the chirp of the lock, Carter got in and buckled up.
Mario fastened his belt and cranked the engine. “I’m not going home alone. I’m going home with you.”
Now I don’t want any comments asking me if Mario speeds out of the parking lot and races home. Got it? It’s not like I choose their names, they just tell me who they are. I’m a pawn I tell ya! And yes, he does like to bounce mushrooms on his head, tyvm.
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Oooh! Cheeky! A great six! xx
huge giggle on your Mario comment. I like you have them both buckle up! A great six and I'm keen to see what lies ahead. Thank you.
Very nice!
Love, love, love his attitude. Well done.
Rawrrr…I know what's next and these two are–very hot. 😉
lol, I didn't even get the Mario connection until reading your comment. 🙂 Great six!
ooh very nice. It was just 6 but you got me hooked wondering what did happen and what will happen! Excellent six!
Great six! Thanks for sharing!
Ha ha! Great six – now I need to read the whole story!
Nice six. I liked their predicament and then Mario’s last line was brilliant.
Love the story idea and the six were great. As far as the name…I've refuse to name a character what she wanted because I couldn't stand a girl in school with the same name 😉
Well, now you just have to hurry up and finish this so I can read it. Because this just isn't enough. 😉
First of all, awesome play on words "flipping a house together, then flipping for eachother." Great word play. I love what Mario says. Stellar job!
Great six.
My crit partner falls into the…I swear I didn't pick the name thing too. LOL I laugh at her too. Hers was Kiki.
But personally, I think of Mario Lopez. RAWR. Hello abs.
I love your tag for the book too.
Oh my. Now what's he going to do with that?! lol. Loved it!
HA! Guess Mario got the last word! LOL
Can't wait to see how this turns out. Great six.
It's got that nice ka-CHING of great dialogue, excellent rhythm and the sense of a punch line with more to come.
Oh, yum, loved that dialogue!
But is he Super Mario? That's what we want to know!
I love your choice of the words "chirp" and "crank." Good writing. And I want to know what happens next!
Awww, "I'm going home with you". Love it!
~Xakara
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Mario telling Carter how it's going to be! Now I want to know if they go home together.
Hmm…I wonder if Carter will give in.
Sounds like they're in for a fun night!
Nice premise and setup. Can't wait for more!
Oh, what a hook. I'm ready for more. Great six!
NIce comeback. Liked it
Intriguing, can't wait to see what happens next!
I love that you mention you are just the instrument! Great humor about their names too. 🙂 Thanks for sharing!