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Okay, on with the story. Brynn has just awakened from surgery after being stabbed in a hotel parking lot.
“You’ll be happy to hear that the only damage done was to your TVA. Â The knife hit right in that gap between your stomach, pancreas, and liver, missing everything important.” He winked. “I was hoping I’d get to donate a kidney or something, make you indebted to me for life, but it didn’t work out that way.” He pressed on her stomach, and Brynn winced. “Good…perfect. I closed you, so you can thank me for your beautiful scars.”
That’s it for me! (Don’t count sentences…) If I have any medical professionals, please don’t judge! This is a rough rough draft so I could have some stuff wrong lol. Have a great week everyone.
Nice six…I didn’t count ;).…
Oh damn that sounds painful!!!
LOL I didn’t count.. I swear 😉 Great snippet.
Cheeky! Nice snippet 🙂
lucky him!
Love the humour of the person speaking! Great six!
Chicks dig scars, right? Or is that just on men? Nice six!
Ouch! I feel Brynn’s pain…
I love his personality! Hope you’ll show her reaction next week. Great excerpt!
I hope there really is a nice blank spot like that so she doesn’t have to suffer too much more. Thanks!
I can’t count past 5 then it’s up to my daddy to help.
Love the six
I bet he’ll help her hear from those scars. Great job. Nice snippet.
Ouch! Beautiful scars…that’s the kind of surgeon I want.
Oh, I just love him! Nice six!
Nice six!! I winced along with Brynn.
I love coming home from a long day at the Evil Empire to see the lovely comments on my SSS 🙂 Thanks for stopping by everyone!
I’m not sure what TVA means, but I’d slap him for squeezing my sore stomach! 😛
Wonderful six! And I hope you have a wonderful week too.