Howdy! Welcome back! I’m here fighting winter away, because I read on the Internet somewhere that spring was coming! We’ll see how long it takes to get up on top of this mountain.
On with the story:
Not trusting her hands to dial, she held down the voice dial button until the electronic voice rang out loud in the stillness.
Say a command.
Brynn let the phone drop to the ground, and slid further down through the pool of blood on the concrete underneath her. She had one shot. Already her strength was fading, so she enunciated each word for the computer. “Dial…nine…one…one.”
Connecting to…nine-one-one.
Okay, off to the other SSS Posters at the Official Website. Have fun!
The suspense is killing me!
OMG! this is FAB! MORE!!
You enjoy torturing us, don't you? 😉 I'm loving this story!
~Sarah
This is torture of the best kind. Slowly leading us along every week. I love these snippets and look forward to each new peek every week.
Oh, I hope the phone knows that command!
Dramatic!
Thank you for continuing this. I hope next week you'll keep going!
That's awesome!! so good.
Well. Why does she need to call 911 and why is she using the computer to do it?
I want to know! *uses her time machine to travel to next Sunday*
I'm not exaggerating, Alanna when I say that I thought about your story all week. I'm going to be all worried about it again!
Damn. Every week I hyperventilate. When are you going to get that poor girl some help???
Oh, my. What a six!
pools of blood – always of interest
YES!.Good six and call the cops.
Great suspense!!
Fabulous! I am SO loving this story. I can't wait to read it altogether. 🙂
Very suspenseful. Looking forward to more.
Oh wow. Great six!
Great suspense! I need to know what happens!
Ooh, what a great hook!
Awesome. Terrific suspense.
'Oly crap! This is fabulous!
Great last line. Guaranteed to pull the reader forward.
Great six!
gem
Could really picture this, and the sliding through the blood was very vivid description!
Great suspense!
But does help come on time? I'm worried about her.
Fabulous tension! Well done! 🙂
Tense excerpt!
Lots of tension and suspense in that little scene! Great!
Smart girl. Very cool head. I'm enjoying my six fix of this story each week. 🙂
Are we losing Brynn?! 🙁
What a cliffhanger! Great job!
Wow, you certainly know how to create suspense.