 Welcome!
I can’t believe this is the last Sunday of August. Summer is almost over, and I’m NOT READY FOR WINTER!! (We don’t get an autumn around here) sigh
Anyway, today I’m sharing six from my (Olivia Brynn’s) untitled m/m. (I call it Jackson)
These are actually the first six in the book.
Noah slouched over his whiskey, trying like hell to ignore the dry-humping couple beside him. He’d get up and move, but the place was packed, and he had to hold onto this bar stool or he’d end up standing against the wall. Facing the crowd. That would lead to eye contact. Eye contact led to conversation.
Noah wasn’t here for conversation.
Makes you wonder what he WAS there for, but it is nothing prurient, I promise you. Check out all the SSS participants at the Official Website. Have a great week!
HAHA! He sounds like me at a bar. 😉
Great hook to start with. Now I want to know what he doesn’t want to talk about.
I love how matter of fact you are here, or I should say as Noah is here. Great character development in so few words. Well done.
Ooh, what *is* he there for? I want to know! Also: snappy first line!
“Dry humping couple” Hahaha! Great six. Love this scene.
I like! Nice flow (and sorry about winter — try not to think on it!)
Hee!! I can guess what he *IS* there for *G*! Great six!
Eye contact led to conversation! Great insight into Noah’s character here.
I agree with Taryn. Great character development in these six.
You have like perfect pitch for male POV.
Only perfect and this is the beginning!
I love it. Conflict in 6 sentences. He’s damned if he does and damned if he doesn’t.
Very nice hook!
Heheh, great six. Well done! 🙂
So…just what IS Noah there for? hmm.….
Oooh excellent six! I love the last lines, the voice is marvelous, makes me want to read much more!!!
great six and love noah!
I would totally buy this based on this beginning. Very relatable, and makes the hero very sympathetic. Great job!
what for then?
Great six!
Gawd, I hate public humpers, and I like Noah already.
Oh what a great six! Love it!
I love this six! Ugh, when you are in a bad mood last thing you need is dry humpers and a packed bar!
Great opening lines. Loved it.
Wonderful opening. I’m like that everywhere 🙂