Happy Sunday! As usual, I’m at work, while you are all enjoying the plethora of posts. I hope at least one of you said “Awwww” just now. For those who did, you’re my favorites.
On with the story:
Cade stood beside Susan, and pulled out a pen light. “Feeling any pain?”
Brynn assessed each body part. She was weak, the same way she felt after a five kilometer run. Without training. She touched her stomach, and even through the gauze and cloth tape, she winced at the pressure.
Hm. Six really aren’t enough sometimes. Maybe we should have sixteen sentences some days, just for kicks 🙂
All right. Be sure to visit the other SSSers at the Official Site. Have a great week!
I get to be the first. Whoo Hooo! I've been following this every week. Love this story. Given she is a woman and where the injury is located, she must be wondering exactly what the damage is. I can only imagine the things going through her head right now. Have a good day, even though it's at work.
DL
Ouch ouch ouch! It's just too bad that she's too owie right now for a smuttier examination. But it's good to see her awake and alert.
I've really enjoyed the progression of this whole scene! Good job!
Great snippet. Hope he has the cure she needs. 🙂
Very nice snippet!
Ouch! I wouldn't want to be her right now. Great job!
Poor Brynn. She's always so uncomfortable.
Hey, at least she's live.
6 from you are never enough. I love your writing.
Nice. 🙂
true – sometimes six is not enough
You're right. Six isn't always enough, but this is a nice tease.
~ Renee
With you six is never enough. I hope they can give Brynn something for the pain.
You're right, six is not enough, I'm ready for more!
At least Brynn is still alive
You did a good job with the six you got! No worries.
well done!
Allure Van Sanz
Awww for you and Brynn both.
The road to recovery…