Happy Sunday! Continuing on with six sentences from my unfinished WiP:
“Come on, Brynn, we can work this out.”
“There is nothing to work out. It’s over.”
“I’ll fight a divorce.” His voice turned frantic. The fire behind his brown eyes was enough to cause Brynn to step back, but not enough to back down.
“Fight it then; it won’t change the outcome. You have thirty days to get off my property. The house is going up for sale.
Jack’s face quickly turned to a bright shade of red. “You are not leaving me.”
Brynn smiled. “You’re right, Jack. I’ve already left.”
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I love Brynn! I love ballsy women.
Tell him Brynn!
Great to see a strong heroine. Love Brynn's determination.
Great dialogue. Reallydislike this Jack dude! Really like Brynn!
Brynn is my favorite character. I love her grit
A nice complex situation here. But i like her turn of phrase.
Brynn is great! Everyone wants to cheer for her.
Woot! Love a woman with a backbone that doesn't bend!
Oh, that is a perfect way to end that snippet. The turns of phrase are totally spot-on, they make me want to read more and find out what happens next.
Thanks for stopping by ladies! I'm getting started on my tour through the sixes now. What fun 🙂
She knows what she wants, doesn't she? Or, rather, what she doesn't want. I'm curious why it didn't work out.
Oooo!!!!! I like this!! Brynn all fire and “My life” and Jack all “nnoooo” Curious to see what comes of it! :D!!
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Angela
Ooh intense. Curious for more.
Go Brynn–stick it to him!!!
Yes. You tell him Brynn!
Powerful post!
Gotta love a woman, who is decisive and takes charge!
Brynn knows what she wants!
Snap. He had that coming.