Happy Sunday! Continuing on with six sentences from my unfinished WiP:
“Come on, Brynn, we can work this out.”
“There is nothing to work out. It’s over.”
“I’ll fight a divorce.” His voice turned frantic. The fire behind his brown eyes was enough to cause Brynn to step back, but not enough to back down.
“Fight it then; it won’t change the outcome. You have thirty days to get off my property. The house is going up for sale.
Jack’s face quickly turned to a bright shade of red. “You are not leaving me.”
Brynn smiled. “You’re right, Jack. I’ve already left.”
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I love Brynn! I love ballsy women.
Tell him Brynn!
Great to see a strong heroine. Love Brynn’s determination.
Great dialogue. Reallydislike this Jack dude! Really like Brynn!
Brynn is my favorite character. I love her grit
A nice complex situation here. But i like her turn of phrase.
Brynn is great! Everyone wants to cheer for her.
Woot! Love a woman with a backbone that doesn’t bend!
Oh, that is a perfect way to end that snippet. The turns of phrase are totally spot-on, they make me want to read more and find out what happens next.
Thanks for stopping by ladies! I’m getting started on my tour through the sixes now. What fun
She knows what she wants, doesn’t she? Or, rather, what she doesn’t want. I’m curious why it didn’t work out.
Oooo!!!!! I like this!! Brynn all fire and “My life” and Jack all “nnoooo” Curious to see what comes of it! :D!!
xx
Angela
Ooh intense. Curious for more.
Go Brynn–stick it to him!!!
Yes. You tell him Brynn!
Powerful post!
Gotta love a woman, who is decisive and takes charge!
Brynn knows what she wants!
Snap. He had that coming.