Welcome back! Â SSS is growing so big! Â I guess get a bunch of erom authors together and we start reproducing like bunnies
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Anyway, back to the story. We join Brynn in the parking garage at pre-crack-o’clock:
The man in front of her appeared without a sound. She had to look up into his face, but it was shadowed beneath a Braves baseball cap that was pulled down low over his brows. All she could really see was a stark black moustache that was thicker than fashionable. He wore a plain black tee shirt and blue jeans. “Bronwynn Williams?” he asked again, his whispery voice raised the tiny hairs on her nape.
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ooo, very nice!
I've had a thing for blond men with mustaches lately. Good to see one making an appearnce in your book! Yum!
I've been reading and writing too many paranormals because my first thought was RUN! Brynn RUN! He's a vampire. :p
Okay, I am suspicious about that mustache
Nice! And I love “pre-crack-o'clock”!
You did a great job getting the image of the guy across and setting the mood in such a few sentences!
You set this up beautifully.
Nice six! Wonder why he knows her name. Looking forward to reading more next week.
Alanna, I always love your writing. This is great.
Nice six!
Very nice, excellent detail which is adding to the suspense. Great job.
I'm torn between is he sexy or scary!
Raised the tiny hairs on my nape too.
Ooo, that's creepy! I like it a lot!
Deny it!
Made the hair stand up on the nape of my neck. Great tension, dark tone, and I'm guessing by the oh-so-subtle clues that he's no villain.
Thanks for stopping by, everyone! I hope I can make it through the ginormous list of SSSers soon.