Wow. It’s 10/10/10. Maybe I should do ten sentences today, just to celebrate! Anyone mind? Okay good. No one tell on me then.
Continuing from last week:
She deliberately waited for him to cross the threshold and get an eyeful of the empty shell of a house before she descended the stairs, with a saccharine smile left by her mauling fantasy.
He couldn’t have seen much. He stood just inside the front door, but the expression of utter disbelief on his ashen face proved that he saw enough, and it was pretty gratifying, but she smothered her smile. He looked up at her when she appeared around the landing.
“What the hell, Bronwynn?” He only called her by her full name when he was pissed. An apologetic attitude might have worked better for him. Shameful maybe. Not this incredulous irritation that only made her blood boil.
Okay, that’s it for me, folks. Be sure to visit the official site for more participants.
Ah, sweet revenge!
Hell, that would make my blood boil too. I imagine he’s going to get quite an earful very soon.
Oh, nice! I want more than 10!
I just love Bronwynn. She so devious!
I loved that last sentence. Great work!
I kind of want to yell at him to run. (Loving this whole sequence.)
Can we get a paragraph next week? Or a page? Please!
I love your idea about doing 10 sentences today. (I had to creatively punctuate just to make it close to 6!) I love how she reacts, her internal thoughts just draw me in as I wonder how she is going to react.
Mauling fantasy? *perks up*
I’m with graylinfox — we need more por favor!
Snap. He’s just digging his hole deeper.