Good morning everyone! I’ve got six more sentences from my WiP here, and maybe now that school is back in session I can actually get to work on some of it. Continuing from last week:
Brynn waited for the congratulatory giggle, but it never came. She rolled her eyes. Susan’s big heart wouldn’t be able to stand it if someone was hurt, even if he deserved it. “Don’t worry Sue, he won’t be destitute. He’s got a job.”
Susan dropped her focus to her cell phone on the table. “Oh…gee…I need to go. I’m showing a house at four.”
Not sure reading a book six sentences a week is the best way to do it, but at this rate, it’s about as fast as I’m writing the thing! Have a great Sunday everyone, and don’t forget to check out the official site for more SSS authors.
Interesting reaction from the best friend. I wonder if there isn’t more going on here with her than just a big heart?
Hmm…Lisa I think you might be right.…
good dialogue. I love it when I can read the voices like they were talking in front of me.
Sometimes a best friend has to be the one to reel you in. I can respect that.
Susan’s got a bigger heart than I do. 😀